Your Beauty and Sweetness

Your Beauty and Sweetness

A Poem by Timely Disposition
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ohh she's like sugar. Physically...mentally...every other kind of "ly"...pure sugar.

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Your Beauty and Sweetness
I can taste,
Just by being in your vicinity.
It haunts me.
Almost, taunts me.
Until I can’t see.
 
I need the freedom
I used to taste.
I’m insatiable
In an immeasurable way.
Today
I actually saw a mirror.
I mean, I was nearer
Than I have ever been.
 
Then
The flaws,
Like claws,
Ripped through my thoughts
And it’s hard to smile
Again.
 
But Your Beauty and Sweetness
It’s the freakness
In this occurrence.
It lacks a deterrent.
It keeps coming back to see this.
 
You.
Who knew?
With all the miles between us.
With all the smiles that see us.
That we’d focus so clearly.
Or merely
That we would even speak.
Oh, I’m so weak
When you’re here.
 
But
I stand
As tall as I can.
I plug the leaks
I am a man.
Who has you.
I do what I do
So, I…and you
Can see this.
Your Beauty and Sweetness.

© 2008 Timely Disposition


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To reiterate! this is a glorious expression of love....really enjoyed reading it again. Smiling at you, Tai

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow this reads like a freestyle but has a very defined pattern an excelent quality.... very nicely done!

~Frances~

Posted 16 Years Ago


wow, the feeling of being in love in words, i thought i'd never find something so reasonably put together here. ^-^ very nice way of putting it together, i love it. =D

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow you are a man in love. Fabulous work. Glad I caught it's shine today, just like sunshine. Smiling at you, Tai

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Timely Disposition

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