The Sombreness Song

A Song about tears and all the nice things in life!

I am no devil that rules freely in the world of gushing grey
but people see the horns of hatred planted
juvenile prejudiced feelings tucked away
hope will not fall onto you,
because life is too concise for tears of insanity

The slow movement of tears rolling, falling
breaking in shattered pieces of malignity
smiles filled with hostility
laughter from crying the song of sombreness,
nightmares will become friends

Life is filled with monotonous movements, moments consecrated with blood
red velvet colour of the blind, seen to be unseen,
lit by the fire of emptiness, lonesome words for the deprived,

When nightmares become friends, when dreams enemies
the song of sombreness is your friend for live through the darkened halls
The slow movement of tears rolling, falling
breaking in shattered pieces of malignity
smiles filled with hostility
laughter from crying the song of sombreness,
because life is too concise for tears of insanity.

Author's Note

bam! please comment =]

Reviews

[~Lizzy♬]

The dark poem was also touched by a beauty. I loved how every part of this poem never let me leave the computer screen. I couldn't take my eyes away. :) Great job!

~Lizzy~

[BlueDreams]

A dark write that sounds painful .. whatever, a great piece .. :-)

[Pratik]

Another dark piece from you and you excel as you do always.. :) The way you have romanticized the affair of tears with our lives in all its somberness has an enchanting effect on this piece.. :) Nice work :)

[Lily Mae]

Bam is right.. was an intense and powerful write.. Defiantly one of my favorites..x