Words Of The Fallen, Stood Up From Death

i am mad at those who hate me... im mad at those who look down on me...

insufficient words, crimes punished by hate
how about fate?
this is a cry. a cry to all
to tell that i have fall
to rhyme i use grammar
in the wrong way like a hammer.
this does not make sense at all
the second time we fall
i stood up, giants fell
i could tell
with the earth shattering
the ring
of fate, fallen on them
fear me, for i am the one, femme.
a word used just to rhyme
for the purpose of fame.
i will end now, not for ever
but till never
reaching the earth
this is filth...

Author's Note

this is my comeback... this is what came from my hand when i just let go... but it is up to you how you feel about it...

Reviews

[Dominique]

Neat, and I can see your anger through the text.

[joshua deathdealer]

incredible free flow!! well done.

[Jane Doe]

i feel that this piece is more sorrowful than anything, but i really enjoyed it!

[EMF]

Damn, you're good. Freeflow again. and stunning. I'm so glad you didn't quit because this is terriffic. Powerful and individual, with a great flow and style. Proper job

[TheSweet]

I didn't really get an angry feel from it as much as a tongue in cheek retort to something, suggesting that you don't care what they think. I quite like it, it's querky.

[Kayla :)]

I liked it O.O what is *femme*??? lol :P

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

If this is filth it is GOOD! Especially for a comeback, it is alright to write a mad write, to just let the pen and hand write... that is when it can be its best. It isn't much thinking and more releasing, just to write! So just write it. Write what you feel, and in this you did just that. It was a bit fun too like this part, that I like:
"to rhyme i use grammar
in the wrong way like a hammer."

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I like this ! :)

[BlueDreams]

Very touching craft .. :-)