fiftyfive

In the distance you can hear the music play

The words mumbled like something drunk

You just lay on the car looking at the starts

You know that you are different than the others

You mother told you so

But you know it is true because you can feel it

But God,

Do you know the pain it takes to be true

The one you intended her to be

But she never gives up

She would try harder

Even if it

Kills her...

Because she loves You

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Awesome, lovely... beautiful, I love this one a lot.
Correction in this line I think for the last word you meant stars instead of "starts":
"You just lay on the car looking at the starts"
Am I the only one to have read all the chapters in this so far? :O More need to read and review these!