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Don’t walk out the door

I ask you on the floor

Me just one more chance

Will show you that I am a better person

Did I know this was you

Just give me one more chance...

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Very nice... the way you placed the single words as a line themselves made it seem so much feeling felt. I like it.

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A Book About The Underside Of A Foot Of A Giant Walking Through A Small Rural Town – Poets Journal

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Amputee World

The Open Door

In The Field

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