fortyfive

And still you make a fool of me when you think you can just take

My life has been going into the wrong directions

What have we become, but a cliché?

Have you looked in the mirror to see the person on the other side?

I do not remember

The piano in the background plays the silent whisper of Für Elise

I do not remember

We waited for this moment to come, but patients ran out of time

Will you help us get out of the mess of suicidal defects?

The slow ticking of a clock in the middle of field

With Für Elise hums the whisper

We walk down the river bed, but our minds go back to the field

Für Elise, the sound of solemn death

The pit of sorrow grows

But out love dies

Für Elise plays a soft whisper in the background

All is dead

All is lost...

And still you make me a fool

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Different... seems like its about a certain subject.

[CHRIS ANDES]

the words are really descriptive...

[_Hanabi_]

really great!!!

[Pratik]

Its great.. one of your first poems I have read so far.... the flow is superb.. great work :)

[joshua deathdealer]

A very insightful and well penned piece. I love the piano references..xx

[Priscilla Sayers]

Nice. Very bold , even through the agony of losing, still the fight in you remains. And when that is ever present, so shall you be. Every present in my thoughts... Perk up, you are skilled, gifted and must go on:)

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[Jadela Villotoes]

I like this one a lot, It makes want more!!!