twenty nine

twenty nine

A Chapter by ((Teenage_Poet_Loser))

Once there lived only two piglets in the home of honey

For they knew nothing of the outside the north

If that is funny

Don’t come forth

My name is Jack says the first

When with thirst

The first blood spilled in gallons

Nobody survived the massacre of felons


© 2011 ((Teenage_Poet_Loser))


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Ha ha. This is what I'm talking about.. Brilliant work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Woah, this image is interesting. Nice rhyming in this, love the piglets in this and the blood... a story gone wrong. Seems to remind me of the three little pigs and the big bad wolf in a totally twisted way.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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