eighteen

Your eyes closed as I walk in

My eyes drenched in tears

But you lay still in the bed

I am the only one by your side

Praying

Talking

Singing

Hoping

You left me alone for far too long

My tears flood down the sides of my cheeks

You lay still with the poison killing you slowly

From the inside

For the last time I saw your smile

It made me cry with a smile

I saw you close your eyes on me for the last time

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

That last line is sad... like a growing death. Nice write once more.