one

stories always form by words being shot around

but this story of my life will be not like that

two days, fourteen hours, what is this about?

Cat.

all this done just to make a simple statement,

but no one understands the life of a teenage poet,

my life lay in front of me

with roads that turn, bend, fall down a creek

will i survive? they always ask

but who cares? is it not my life?

all these questions, too much for me

my life will be led by a bee

fly around the world with only one aim,

to make poems rhyme and songs being sung

by voices of angles,

this is my

life

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Well... already I can just say, wow. I love how you put the interesting thought into this, its different, like this line i love:
"my life will be led by a bee"

[TheRavenQueer]

This looks interesting, I'll definitely read through it. Haha! I like the way you started this off. One spelling error: it should be "angels" instead of "angles". Other than that, great job!

[Blessed_Angel]

love this pome. It has deep emotion in it and it is brilliently written. Good job keep up the good work.

[BeccaB]

what a brilliant begining and opening ^_^ i like the way you start this ^_^