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A Poem by ((Teenage_Poet_Loser))
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The wind wil make us dust....!

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time will make us dust,
we must thus
not trust
those who use us

© 2011 ((Teenage_Poet_Loser))


Author's Note

((Teenage_Poet_Loser))
i just wrote this when i uploaded some of my photos =]

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..just listen to your heart!!..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Such a nice and simple rhyme scheme!
:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very true, these several little lines here!
I've also read some of your other writing, and I have to admit I'm kind of hooked!
Looking forward to seeing more from you! (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice few lines ..
well done ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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