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A Poem by
((Teenage_Poet_Loser))
The wind wil make us dust....!
time will make us dust,
we must thus
not trust
those who use us
© 2011 ((Teenage_Poet_Loser))
Author's Note
i just wrote this when i uploaded some of my photos =]
Reviews
..just listen to your heart!!..
Posted 13 Years Ago
Such a nice and simple rhyme scheme!
:)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Such a nice and simple rhyme scheme!
:)
Very true, these several little lines here!
I've also read some of your other writing, and I have to admit I'm kind of hooked!
Looking forward to seeing more from you! (:
Posted 13 Years Ago
Very true, these several little lines here!
I've also read some of your other writing, and I have to admit I'm kind of hooked!
Looking forward to seeing more from you! (:
nice few lines ..
well done ;)
Posted 13 Years Ago
nice few lines ..
well done ;)
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