God Cries With Me

God Cries With Me

A Poem by ((Teenage_Poet_Loser))
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I think sometimes God cries with us, not just we as humans.

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A tear drop drop slowly from your face, scars of burning acid left behind,
Every punch hit You, fists of hate, rage, lust, murder,
Screams, cries, pain inflecting hits, You take all without hesitate,
We pray to You, You cry with us, tears of acid fall from the sky,
Disasters of nature, killing us one by one, but the killing never stops,
Jesus what is this,
A cry, a prayer, call it what you want, Jesus,
I need help,

Scars form on my knees, holes in front of my bed,
A dark room, a round edge made from gold,
Black words edged on white paper,
Words once prayed from high pulpits in front of thousands
Now lay useless, helpless, open to only me.
"For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son,"

© 2011 ((Teenage_Poet_Loser))


Author's Note

((Teenage_Poet_Loser))
I received an email from someone I know and he told me something quite awesome, Not only we as humans cry over things that happens, but God also, he doesnt want us to get hurt...

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On the ball called awesome.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Powerfully penned!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful poem...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Really passionate poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love this, I love these lines the most: "Words once prayed from high pulpits in front of thousands
Now lay useless, helpless, open to only me.
"For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son,"

Posted 13 Years Ago


Deep strong emotions here .. There are arms that heal .. God feels our every pain .. He is compassionate and empathetic ..

I hear you ! .. Jasmine ..

Posted 13 Years Ago


passionate, vulnerable, but best of all real. Relateable! Loved it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


So true and you penned those emotions well..x

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the diction and the idea behind this poem. It helps in a way to humanize god and thus make it seem a more realistic idea to believe in for people.
I loved this poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on October 27, 2011
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