God Cries With Me

I think sometimes God cries with us, not just we as humans.

A tear drop drop slowly from your face, scars of burning acid left behind,
Every punch hit You, fists of hate, rage, lust, murder,
Screams, cries, pain inflecting hits, You take all without hesitate,
We pray to You, You cry with us, tears of acid fall from the sky,
Disasters of nature, killing us one by one, but the killing never stops,
Jesus what is this,
A cry, a prayer, call it what you want, Jesus,
I need help,

Scars form on my knees, holes in front of my bed,
A dark room, a round edge made from gold,
Black words edged on white paper,
Words once prayed from high pulpits in front of thousands
Now lay useless, helpless, open to only me.
"For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son,"

Author's Note

I received an email from someone I know and he told me something quite awesome, Not only we as humans cry over things that happens, but God also, he doesnt want us to get hurt...

Reviews

[Dominique]

That is a neat write and that someone was awsome to inspire you. I liked it.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Very nice, I like that last line and what your author's note explains. Nice title, nice write.
Correction:
drop drops slowly
"A tear drop drop slowly from your face,"

[CHRIS ANDES]

good

[Kayla :)]

O.O no words to describe how good this poem is :) other than :) totally really good poem :P Loved it

[Jeremy Baker]

Beautiful allusions and message - very inspiring.

[EMF]

A very powerful and dramatic piece. With a relevant and strong message. Thank you for posting it.

[Raya Avans]

I really liked the second stanza most of all.. but the whole piece was powerful, and very well written. :) Well done Jaco..

[The fallen of innocence]

wow, this makes me wanna cry, so beautiful

[WritersSoul]

Great piece (as always) and I'm not a God person, but people always tell me to pray and just hold onto that lil bit of hope. Yeah, others also say that he doesn't want us hurtin' :/
Beth :3

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Well written! I find the statement in this poem-"very powerful"... hits you to the core. Great job!