This Time I Hope It Was Real

We all want love... Even if we don't admit it.

Your touch
so soft, you move
so gentle,
your eyes shine
of beauty,
your smile,
make me
happy.
Those are only dreams,
for what is
real,
is a nightmare.
You make me cry,
scream, hate, bleed, vomit.
Will this never end?
"God help me,"
My prayer bounce
from wall
to
wall,
more screams, hate, blood.
"Why don't you die,"
'bang, bang, bang,'
blood drips from the wall.
I close my eyes,
in the middle of the night.
Your touch
so soft, you move
so gentle,
your eyes shine
of beauty,
your smile,
make me
happy.
This time, I hope, it was real

Author's Note

I don't think this poem is good.. bleh! I just wanted to get a message out... People are tough, some aren't, but never will we ever really admit we want to be loved... Some children never get love from their parents, and that is so sad because it stays with them for the rest of their lives... I am fortunate to have love in my home... I need to shut up now :)

Reviews

[J. J. Nightingale]

Think you meant .. Your touch is soft .. and you move so gentle ..
Also .. My prayer bounce
from wall .. might be , My prayers bounce from wall to wall ..
your smile,
make me
happy. .. Maybe you meant .. Your smile makes me happy ?

I understand your words .. You just want REAL .. and happy ..

Cool ! .. Jasmine .. .. :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Not bad. Could be far worse.

[stars are far]

ohh this was so romantic and sensitve
and i hope for you it become real ..

[Scytheriax]

I have to admit, I really liked this poem.
Who the hell am I kidding? I love just about everything you write, haha

[Raya Avans]

I personally enjoyed this poem, I related to it and defiantly got the message you were putting out there with this piece.. Wonderfully done :)

~ rae

[Pratik]

It is rather a good one! you seem to share a love=hate relationship with this person and have brought that out nicely through the poem.. Well done mate! :)

[Tasha]

I thought it was really good, and the words were so true. Keep on penning.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Savior knowmore]

btw, not all the poems i read suck, just making that clear. but this one is really good. :)

[Savior knowmore]

Well.... there was certainly alot of meaning in this poem, unlike other poems I've had the "pleasure" to have wasted my last six hours on.