No More!

Sometimes you have to stand up for yourself!

Sharpened blade
cut the skin
causes bleeding, it
kills with one swipe
but your words,
words fly through the
sky
piercing the
skin of my body.
Your words are
poison!
Running through my
veins,
my heart stops beating
I fall to the ground
but
still
live.
Poison filled words
enter my body
with speed
as you scream at me with hate, rage, fury!
I stand up
with the little energy
in my body
to look you in the eyes
and say
no
more.

Author's Note

:) hope its not to bad :)

Reviews

[light and ashes]

This is fantastic. I love it. "I stand up with the little energy in my body to look you in the eyes and say no more," when we are being beat down mentally or physically you need to stand up for yourself and let them know that you aren't going to take it anymore, take no crap!

[Dominique]

This is actually amazing. I think this is great.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

This is nice, a good and well written meaning in this as well as a fitting title, I like the ending sentence:
"I stand up
with the little energy
in my body
to look you in the eyes
and say
no
more. "

[Cody Michael]

Very powerful...I love this piece of writing. You have talent and don't ever dought your self on that.

[J. J. Nightingale]

I see a pattern here .. Who killed your heart with anger .. Who has eviscerated your world .. .. a girl ..

I like that you rose up, and said "no more" ... Jasmine

[Aly Jones]

Are they dead?

[Savior knowmore]

Your words are
poison!
Running through my
veins,

these words... For some reason they make me think of a song... oh well. Well done. :)

[stars are far]

full of emtions ..
very nice :)

[Sarah Jane]

Full of emotion, I love it

[Maryum Mazhar]

Another awesome piece.
Good job! :)

[Sarah E. Pearson]

Nicely done! Vivid, intense, sharp, strong emotions; this poem is great. keep up the good work.