HATE!

I feel this feeling

tears roll down my face
from the pain
the pain that you caused
you hit me
with that thing
thing of yours!
the blood mix with my tears
and fall to the ground
never have I felt this feeling,
I look at you and see red
from all the rage
I feel it now
stronger than before
HATE

Author's Note

I think I need a break from wrting a bit, my brain is fried!

Reviews

[MmeCorpse]

Definitely a lot of hate lol, and I understand the brain-fry perfectly. I'm there right now >

[Priscilla Sayers]

You definitely sound angry. Maybe you should keep writing and get it out. Even if you think your brain is fried... It's not. It's frustrated. It needs to be released! So let it flow. Show me what you've got! Give me your struggle, your pain, your loss. Show me an image of what makes you happy, relaxed, comfortable, secure.
Don't suppress your talent! Let it unfold, let it escape and you never know where it may take you.

[HeIsWe]

I know this feeling all to well, But this is really good.