Is This Poetry?

What is poetry today?

shattered memories, dreams broken
bunch of lies
Fly around in the wake of time,
what can we call poetry?
if I can see your tears
isn't that
that
something of true beauty?
I feel the guilt build
up...
as I kiss your lips softly
our tears meet
one
and
other
Now I ask again,
is this poetry?

Author's Note

:)

Reviews

[Dominique]

That is amazing you are very talented. Your poetry is amazing. :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Nice work. Thought provoking.

[J.V. Stanley]

Quite interesting, I find the most mundane things to be the most poetic sometimes except sometimes those things have no words.

[Raya Avans]

Theres not much for me to say.. loved this.. for some reason it made me smile but i'm not sure way, sort of voluntary really.. :) well done!

~ rae

[hmm]

very awesome! love it

very beautiful

[Maryum Mazhar]

Awwww

I really really love how you put all this together!!!

[Ashley Campbell]

"bunch of lies
Fly around in the wake of time,
what can we call poetry?"

I like this little section, "bunch of lies" doesn't seem to fit to me until after the next line, it adds a certain flow I find very enjoyable. A very good write :).

~Ashley

P.S Thank you for pointing out my spelling error :).

[Hinoglue]

Yes, and very good poetry at that! :{D

[Tasha]

Wow, this was beautiful poetry and such a nice read.
♥ Ta'Shandra