The Heart

Gore...

Pulsating movement
Spastic behaviour
Blood
Blood
So much blood
spewing out of it
lub dub, lub dub
It's the sound of your
heart it's pumping
in my hands
With a smile on my face
I give it back to you
You gasp
for air to fill your
thirst for air
But your heart
yeah your heart
is beating outside your chest...

Author's Note

I know this is not everyones cup of tea... but is it good or bad?? does it make anay sense at all...

Reviews

[Bluefire]

Awsome! I love it! :D

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Oh this cup of tea was quite delightful, haha. I like the darkness and the suffering in this. Very very nice, enjoyed this and I like this poem a lot.

[Dominique]

It is beutiful in a wired sort of way.

[Arianna]

its pretty good.
its not my thing
but i still admit
its beautiful
and i really enjoy it

[WritersSoul]

for some reason i dont get it, :P i am only 15 and still dont get jokes that make sense to me. But i get it somehow :L if that makes aby sense :D
Beth :3

Its good, the metaphors are brilliant!!

[Muse]

Not bad at all! Very creative. I love metaphors that invoke vivid imagery. If you check out my poem......The Last Waltz.......you'll see why. I love beauty mixed with morbidity.

[J.V. Stanley]

Wow, very gruesome and definitely my cup of tea. Certainly makes sense on many levels, actually felt like the victim in this poem for the past months or so. Very cool (the poem, not the feeling) lol

[Julie Beth]

a bit on the gorey side, but i liked it awesome job :)

[MmeCorpse]

Good, and it makes sense in an abstract fashion. Love it.