What Now....?

I am....

this is only a small letter
ink marks stain the tips of the page
drops of blood cover the black ink
i smear the tear off my face
and throw it across the room
shattered moments of time
fly through the room
my body fall
numb
i cant
go
on
...

Author's Note

... =/

Reviews

[Joshua Ramirez]

Hi there, thank you for sharing your poem.

I've read it a couple of times and it feels quite abstract to me. I want to think that you are describing a piece of paper in front of you, you're writing a small letter to us, someone else; however, I get a small feeling that maybe you're talking about yourself as that medium, the page. You smudge off a tear on your face, could it be that those ink and blood come from others, and the stain on this page is a scar/lesson on your life? I do like that the lines get shorter and your will shrinks,

[Dominique]

Hmm, good. I like how you leave it with the reader to figure some things out yet there is everything there.

[WritersSoul]

ooooooo i like it :3

[Silent Serenity also kn..]

You allow your readers to feel what your expressing, extremely well written & powerful! Great creation Jaco!

[Lily Mae]

I could feel it as I read on...excellent description..xx

[Scytheriax]

I loved the imagery in the poem. The emotion of the piece was expressed perfectly. I really loved this poem.

[HeIsWe]

very good.

[Ursula Kay Vos]

very descriptive. very dark moments described.

[MmeCorpse]

Very powerful for last moments and last words. Well done :)

[hmm]

Amazing! and powerful.