Hate...

I was mugged and saw hate in his face =[

i look you in the eyes
hate i
see only hate
why did you do it
who did it to you
tears roll down my face
but you laugh
with joy
............
The blood drip down your face
it stains the floor
but I laugh with pure joy
at your                             -death-

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

A story told in this.

[K.C. Zbryk]

Feels like random thoughts pieced together into a poem. Almost like the fragmented thinking thats the result of a traumatic experience. its a unique poem thats full of emotion i liked it

[WritersSoul]

Wow, this is very random but in a good way
However, i liked it :)
Good write :3

[Maryum Mazhar]

lol

"at your - death."

very cool :P :)

[hmm]

Loved the second part of this, awesome!

[Dushyant Thadani]

Use some punctuation in the second line... Apart from that, brilliant work... :)

[WatashLegend]

I can't say good or bad but more like incomplete. It seems like there should be a second stanza in the middle to link the first and last stanza in the poem.

[((Teenage_Poet_Loser))]

s**t that means bad =/

[Jeremy Haynes]

Really weird, a few errors.

[((Teenage_Poet_Loser))]

good or bad way =]