There

A poem by me =D

In the middle of a grass field
he lies, abondoned
Flies fly past
people walke by
nothing notices
The sound of the typewriter
clicking away
Writing the next piece
of the story
This part ends
The book closes
His body lies still in the tall grass

Reviews

[((Teenage_Poet_Loser))]

tnx for the read josh man! =D

[joshua deathdealer]

Nice work. I too like the idea of the typewriter and the ending of this interesting write...xx

[((Teenage_Poet_Loser))]

tnx alot =D

[o]

that's really good.

"The book closes
His body lies still in the tall grass"

it makes the reader wonder about the story that led to this conclusion. well done.

[Shep]

Love the idea of stillness as the typwriter is the only sound except the beating on the keys. Niecly done.