There

A poem by me =D

In the middle of a grass field
he lies, abondoned
Flies fly past
people walke by
nothing notices
The sound of the typewriter
clicking away
Writing the next piece
of the story
This part ends
The book closes
His body lies still in the tall grass

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I really like the imagery in this, the way of a writer in this.
I really like this part:
"The sound of the typewriter
clicking away
Writing the next piece
of the story
This part ends
The book closes"

Correction:
walk
"people walke by"

[Science girl]

Ahhh bliss! Nothing like being outdoors and writing your heart out :)

[((Teenage_Poet_Loser))]

are my stories that kao =/

[Jeremy Haynes]

very good, im not sure if you meant to but a e at the end of walk, but good.

[KAOlmsted]

stick to poetry

[Bridgette's Ink]

I wish I were lying in that grass :) Anyway I really liked it, it was so simple but I could still visualize it. Oh and I am just now reading all my read reviews so your gonna have alot of reviews from me.reading all my read reviews so your gonna have alot of reviews from me.

[ImagineItAll]

Huh, pretty awesome write.

[Parker Aaron]

This is fun. To lie and write outside is about perfect.

[MindCage]

"nothing notices"
I like this line because its NOTHING not NO ONE, :)

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Really lovely writing! I like whole wording.
Keep it up!
Do you read mine too "Anguish and She"
God bless you!
Lucky!