The Kids

The Kids

A Story by ((Teenage_Poet_Loser))
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Haunted House... You are warned!

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I can hear the screaming from the room behind me. I sit curled up against the wall, my head between my legs. The words hit my head with bursts like fire escaping its comfort zones. My tears burn dark lines onto my face. As I lift my head, I can see the crack on the wall in front of me. The white paint being ripped off the wall as the shouts come nearer. I start to hum a verse that stuck in my head the previous night. My window is open, I can see vague shadows move outside. 

My room reeks of old sweat, but I am already used to it. The light started to flash in the roof. The room turned into a light and dark room, flashing every couple of seconds. My eyes began to hurt from the light. It was not 2 minutes when the light went out. The room turned dark, only lit by the dull moonlight. The shadows outside began to move more freely, jumping from side to side. A sudden gust of wind blew open my door.

I always knew that the house was different from a normal house. I knew the story that went around about twelve children that was hung from this room. My room. But I never believed the ghost stories. I always said to myself it was a fake story made up by stupid kids. Sitting face to face with the reality now made me wimp. It made me cry out of fear.

In the door stood four figures. Four small children. Their bodies pale white, their eyes black with no life in it. The cuts made by the rope was visible around their necks. I could hear every breath they took. They looked at me. I curled up against the wall again, feeling the presence of their bodies near me. Visible cracks on the roof was forming, I could hear it. I could feel the paint drop on my shoulder as the cracks spread. The room became more dark when the moon hid behind a cloud. I could barely make out the figures in the door, I knew they were there.

“What do you want,” I managed to say when they started to walk towards me. They didn’t answer. They kept on walking slowly towards me. Their hands were covered with blood, bright red against their white skin. Dark rings covered their eyes, they didn’t have any eyes! Black holes looked back at me. I could hear silent whispers come towards me. My feet tried to kick them away, but I could get enough energy towards my legs to kick them. My arms felt weak, I couldn’t get up or speak.

From the roof fell four ropes, the edged covered with stains of blood. I knew what this was. I knew how the story ended. We told it over and over to try to scare each other. I never got scared. I never believed. Loud sobs came from my mouth the moment the first boy touched my leg. His touch was cold, leaving blue marks where his hand was on me. He took my hand with a strong grip. I didn’t move, but something inside me made me stand up. A slight smile came to the boy’s face when I got up. It made me fear him even more, crying louder.

The rope was tight around my neck, my feet barely touching the ground. Tears didn’t help anymore. I looked up to the ceiling, where the cracks first started to show, and said in a soft voice, filled with pain, “Why…”

My feet were lifted from the ground, I couldn’t breathe anymore. The moon shone a little bit brighter once it moved away from the cloud. All the children looked at me while I hung in the air, smiling a kind of satisfied smile. I could hear one of them breathe louder again. The dim-lit room started to fade away, fade to a shading of black, covering my sight completely. My eyes closed for the last time, the last air escaped through my throat.

© 2011 ((Teenage_Poet_Loser))


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Wow a haunted house indeed, this is very good. I enjoyed this. Indeed creepy and suspenseful of the moment. I really like this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The ever since i read the first sentence to it i got hooked!!!! good job and i hope u keep up with it

Posted 13 Years Ago


tnx alot hey =D saw your other review aswell... keep my name in your mind =D 2013 or if sooner it will be awesme, but 2013 is the year my first book will be reliesed =D**

Posted 13 Years Ago


You engaged all of my sense in the first paragraph itself. I have been wanting to write a story similar to this but there always seems to be something wrong with it, to me at least. This, in my own opinion, was flawless. I found myself reading faster, almost in a suspense, to read what was to happen next, of coarse not wanting to miss any of your impeccable detail. I so love how you write and am defiantly going to be reading some more from you. :)

~ rae

Posted 13 Years Ago



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