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A Chapter by Thayle L.
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I invited 16 people to my house today.

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I invited 16 people to my house today
For a tour of the mansion.

They walked through the corridors
Oohing and aahing at the pictures

They walked through the garden
Complimenting my flowers.

They walked into the basement
Impressed by the catacombs.

They spent the whole tour
Completely oblivious to the graves
That do not yet exist.


© 2015 Thayle L.


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This one is a bit eerie, it could be them entering the house of a serial killer and they are about to become the next victims. I like it. I thinks it's open to many interpretations.

Posted 9 Years Ago


People only see what they want and need to see. Convenient blindness and ignorance. Good job

Posted 9 Years Ago


Thayle L.

9 Years Ago

Thanks! I started, unlike most of my poems, with only an ending

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Thayle L.
Thayle L.

Cupertino, CA



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