sleeping eternally

how somethings will never change

at the end of the day when theres nothing left
when i have just run out of things to say
i break and fray and try to tear away
everything thats still the same



cast a spell on me
cast a spell on me
to make me sleep for eternity 
and thats where i would stay
to play out my final days



i open up my eyes and still nothings changed
now iv come to despise the things i cant rearrange 
iv woken up and its the same its still the same 
and every day it hasent change
it will be like reliving yesterday

when i have just run out of things to say
i break and fray and try to tear away
everything thats still the same

Reviews

[L0v3craft]

Oh, boy...I get this feeling a lot! Its rather sad-- depressing even!

But I thank myself for having a very good, vivid imagination to escape in :P

Anyway, really like the poem simply because its easy to relate to and I'm sure everyone has gone through the unpleasant feeling of just wanting to "tear away". For me, its this mundane reality...there needs to be magic, adventure and hot male elves and all that dorky dungeons and dragons stuff in real life, man :P

[Cosmic kid]

I love this is extremely heartfelt and emotional, "I open up my eyes and still nothing's changed", I love it.

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O.O I love how you arrange the words the words to rhyme and to desrcribe something like speaking in a sentence! AwEsOmE! :D

[Perfect Mistake]

I liked the rhyming that was within this. It flows great together and tells a great story along with it. Good work :3

[Chesney W.]

i like this, alot......good write!

[Michael G.]

Good lyrics...

[lindsay]

this is really good.:)