![]() SnowA Poem by Ashley![]() I wrote this poem a couple yrs ago, but it remains one of my most creative pieces![]() I went outside, to be a lone After awhile it began to snow,I looked up into the night sky, saw nothing but darkness I looked away from the sky, closed my eyes I felt a drop of coldness on my nose When I opened my eyes, I saw snow Looked up at the sky once again and saw nothing but dark clouds I rubbed my eyes and went inside.
I asked everyone if they had seen snow, they all said "no" I shook my head and went to my room I couldn't stop thinking about the snow, I only saw I tried falling asleep to get it out of my mind When I shut my eyes, I saw snow.
I opened my eyes and saw my plain old room When I looked closer, I saw bits of whiteness falling from my ceiling I called my sister to my room She saw nothing out of the ordinary She left the room, in confusion
Everytime I blinked I did not see darkness, I saw light. I thought I was just cold and tired So, I curled up on my bed under tons of blankets. I closed my eyes to fall asleep I was looking forward to my dreams I did not get what I wanted Snow is all that I saw, in my mind's eye I kept my eyes shut anyways.
All I saw was a brightness, from the snow When I tried to open my eyes, they kept shut I tried to force them open with my hands and still they would not open Suddenly I felt a cold, calm feeling take over my body Even though I could not really open my eyes, I looked up and saw snow.
The snow was coming down hard now. It was like a hard pounding on my body, yet I just laid there Laying in the snow, no one could see Feeling the snow, no one else could feel I felt the snow enveloping me and all I did was watch it fall upon me. What I saw, only I could see The snow completely covered me I never did open my eyes again.
© 2008 Ashley |
Stats
105 Views
Added on October 25, 2008 Author![]() AshleyBristolville, OHAboutHi, I'm Ashley Young. I am 21 years old. I'm 5'2" with an athletic body. A lot of people tend to not think of me much because of my size, but I am stronger than I look. Umm...I'm pretty outgoing but I.. more..Writing
|