If I Were Gone, Nobody Would Notice

If I Were Gone, Nobody Would Notice

A Poem by Ashley
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Its as if I'm not even here

I sit there and talk,but nobody seems to be listening

I look around, I see people having fun

I'm here, but nobody seems to notice me

No one cares or even seems to notice,

That I'm drifting away into nothingness

© 2008 Ashley


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I know this feeling. Like you are in the middle of a crowded room and all is quiet, but you are screaming at the top of your lungs and no one even turns to look.

Posted 16 Years Ago


That's just sad. What's sadder is that I understand.


Posted 16 Years Ago


You are transcending time a space and are looking back at yourself, but a whole world is observing you while you see yourself. The nothingness we speak is from the voices of those who wait for you to begin your incredible experience and tell us what you feel. We are all waiting with exasperation to hear about your beginning.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on August 18, 2008
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Ashley
Ashley

Bristolville, OH



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Hi, I'm Ashley Young. I am 21 years old. I'm 5'2" with an athletic body. A lot of people tend to not think of me much because of my size, but I am stronger than I look. Umm...I'm pretty outgoing but I.. more..

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