Curtains closing

Curtains closing

A Poem by Deepsoul1889
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This is about, what you could do if you get addict to things. Like cutting and drugs.

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Curtains closing
Curtains closing it's the end.
Broken hearts, rules were bend.
Tears in her eyes, cuts on her arms.
Curtains closing. Is she dead?
People crying, teenager gone.
Angels floating, curtains
closing.
"Please, please!" is what she begged.
"I'm sorry, but you are dead." Angel says.
"I just want to see my mom and dad."
"I'm sorry the curtains have cloed,
it's the end."

© 2011 Deepsoul1889


Author's Note

Deepsoul1889
This is what I would dream of when I still was "emotional"

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sometimes its good to "die" or "end" so we can start anew!! ((HUG))


Posted 13 Years Ago


Its so emotional and beautifully sad. I love this poem really much, so touching... The curtains, I love how you use curtains at the end, its really cool. Also, there's a really heart breaking story behind, thats what I love about this writing :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Deepsoul1889
Deepsoul1889

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Hi-ii! I'm CJ, I love writing poetry, and stories ( I'm working on a story right now ) I love to make new friends, and like to get to know people. When I'm writing I get really deep, most of my storie.. more..

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