Falling Apart

Nothing hurts me more

Than seeing my mother cry.

It hurts me more

Knowing it’s my father’s fault.

Nothing hurts me more

Than seeing it all before me.

It hurts me more

Knowing the end may be close.

Nothing hurts me more

Than seeing her anger towards him.

It hurts me more

Knowing he acts like it’s no big deal.

Reviews

[Bec]

Very good Ruby. You've captured the scene so movingly. I think it might need a few more Ines added to the ending though.

[mila]

Thank you! And yeah I think you're right, I should add a few more lines