STUCK

i haven't finished this yet... but anyone who wants to leave a review to help me finish is more than welcome

i'm running in circles

i'm running and jumping

i'm escaping my life

and it's not working

 

i've been through pain

i've witnessed happiness

i have had enough

i just need to escape

 

i've gotta get out

away from this mess

this hell hole of a life

where mistakes are forbidden

 

where punishment is unlimited

where people can do anything

no one has to watch what is said

no one cares what happens

 

i'm running and jumping

hiding my face

showing nothing

nothing at all

 

all i know

i have to get out

it's not a have to anymore

i need to get out

Author's Note

help me finish writing it... if you think it needs more... PLEASE!

Reviews

[kelsey]

thanks so much!

[H. G. ROBERT]

To me it felt complete, going on and on is never a good thing. Less is more. But again, it is just my opinion.
I like it as it as, mainly its theme that has been said and that before but you spice it with a sense urgency and make it fresh and new.

Kudos.