Oh Chocolate Milk?

Oh Chocolate Milk?

A Poem by team-sophie
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this was in response to a poem a friend wrote about how much he loved chocolate milk lol

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Oh chocolate milk,

Why complicate

What is so plain and white?

An endless ongoing brightness

And a healthy one at that.

A blank canvas,

A clean sheep,

A burst of snow,

A glass of milk.

© 2008 team-sophie


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Love this simple free style write
When I was growing up in the sixties we had Real milk bottles delivered in pre dawn hours clink clink we would hear as he ran past our back bedrooms to the back door milk crate
My father would get up or come back from a fishing day out and slurp the whole bottle down in one breath gulp
Needless to say my mum ordered a few each day from the milkman
Cute write

Posted 4 Years Ago


LOL This poem is cute I am glad I was the first to comment, i like it was a hoot to read keep it up peace & stay safe...

Posted 16 Years Ago



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