Deal breaker

Are you a heartbreaker?
Cause I'm a painstaker
I'm not the flavor
That you savor

I’m a moviemaker
The creator
I'm an American reject
Easy to forget

I'm a punk rocker
An A1 amateur
I'm a midnight kisser
A Straight-up clincher

You're a Main Street talker
I'm an Alley walker
I'm a stand-up, fall-hard
I always get scarred

You're a short cut taker
I'm an adventure seeker
You go with the flow
I make my own tempo

I'm an all-day laugher
A late-night crier
I'm a misfire
But a survivor

You're a dream breaker
I'm a deep bleeder
That makes me weaker
Am I a deal-breaker?

Reviews

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

I like the back-and-forth, see-saw comparison between the one and the other. Opposites do attract, so it's not necessarily a deal breaker. Well done.

[Talia]

Thanks for reading!!

[emipoemi]

- "Easy to forget" ("easily" is an adverb);
- And do you mean "pain-taker" ("painstaker" is not a legit word, but it would mean "someone who goes through life carefully and thoroughly).
- "....stand-up, fall-hard" (great line, but your need the hyphen there, and the comma).

But other than that - holy kwap!!!! I wrote something similar a while back (not on WC, though). Absolutely well done!! Much enjoyed.