You

A song about getting over somebody.

I don't understand you
I'm talking to a wall
I remember what you said
What's a girl to do?

Can you give me a clue?
Would it kill you to call?
You told me all your secrets
and we shared a laugh or two

But that’s all in the past
And in your little mind
I will always be dead last
After everything you put me through

Come back
Come back
Come back
Don't leave me

Reach out
Reach out
Reach out
Onto my hand

Grow up
Grow up
Grow up
He never loved you
He never loved you

When I talk to you
The minutes turn to hours
But hours feel like minutes
Do you have that feeling too?

I remember those days all too well
One look at your face is like going through hell
You let my heart bleed out
But that's what you're all about


Should I be smiling because we’re good friends
Or crying because it’s all pretend
You're just down the street
I hear my words repeat

Come back
Come back
Come back
Don't leave me

Reach out
Reach out
Reach out
Onto my hand

Grow up
Grow up
Grow up
He never loved you
He never loved you

You put on a show
Your horns hold up your halo
Your such a liar
But I have that fire

Who do you think you are?
How could I let this go so far?
I shouldn't have stayed
Your words cut like a blade

You think you're better than me
You made me feel so small
You make me want to scream
You f*****g know-it-all

Get back
Get back
Get back
Leave me alone

I don't
I don't
I don't
Care at all

Guess what?
Guess what?
Guess what?
I never loved you
I never loved you

I don't care at
all
all
all

I'm over you
I never loved you

Author's Note

My first song I've posted on here. Let me know your thoughts!

Reviews

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

I really love this, awesome song lyrics

[Talia]

Thank you!
Glad you enjoyed

[emipoemi]

A great man once said that a song cannot live without the music. I don't know what tune you had envisioned while writing this, but the tune I derived while attempting to sing this proves some lines in the later verses to be a little off. Also, you set the first set of verses so nicely....but the rest of the song doesn't follow that....what happened? Other than those minor technicalities, this is powerful, and the choruses just hit it over the freaking park. Brilliant! Absolutely well done!

[Talia]

Well I sang it like a rock anthem lol
But towards the second half, I just started to write and not so worried about the proper rhyming as much. And I wanted to show the girl slowly getting over him and then be done with it. That's why this last time the chorus is different. Like a triumph to her.

Thank you!

[emipoemi]

Oh, yeah, nothing wrong with the choruses themselves. Only with the verses....seeming a little off at times. And the way it flowed for me, the "I don't care at all" could be repeated three times (as in the whole line, not just the "all") before going into the last couple of lines. And you know what would be ridiculously awesome, too, is that the second "he never loved you" be instead "he never loved me".

[Talia]

I honestly did think that for the second chorus lol I mind edit this a little

[emipoemi]

it wouldn't hurt to make a few tweaks for power and tune (it's good to have a tune in mind so you could flow the lyrics along it)

[Talia]

Yea like I said a power rock vibe

[emipoemi]

so weave it like that and find a way to record it so we can hear it.

[Talia]

I think chorus many captured that vibe, but I am going to tweak it.

[emipoemi]

The choruses are flawless (the suggestion regarding making one "he never loved you" (in both iterations) say "me" instead was to amp up the power). It's a few lines among the verses that didn't strike me as fluid)

[Talia]

I agree there are parts where I was reaching