A Blur

Loss of hope In a
Teary-eyed girl
Now you're a Blur
And I can't cope

Reviews

[emipoemi]

I have no words.....my voice is in my awe!! Well done!

[Talia]

Thanks so much
I wanted to add more but kept it simple.

[emipoemi]

No need to add more. You could fiddle around with line breaks (this doesn't have to be a haiku), but you don't need to add more. It says it all as is

[Talia]

That's true