Every Night
A Poem by Talia
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All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
© 2019 Talia
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I adore short poetry , its the best :)
made me think , what would be the rest , what happened just before you wrote those words
All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
But you gone?
All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
and days
All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
I hate it so much?
All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
but I can't?
All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
Shame?
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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5 Years Ago
Before? All those questions and more
Glad you enjoyed!
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I miss that kind of love. Great poem I really enjoyed it.
Posted 5 Years Ago
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short and to the point, like this one
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Thank you for reading!
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I feel this way about someone. This sounds so sweet even though there isn't much content there. Great job.
Posted 5 Years Ago
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It is honest, and direct, which I like.
Nicely done.
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Thanks for reading!
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I adore short poetry , its the best :)
made me think , what would be the rest , what happened just before you wrote those words
All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
But you gone?
All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
and days
All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
I hate it so much?
All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
but I can't?
All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
Shame?
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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5 Years Ago
Before? All those questions and more
Glad you enjoyed!
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It's a feat to write a haiku that rhymes and flows at the same time. Sweetly cheesy, but utterly brilliant! Well done!
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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6 Reviews
Added on August 24, 2019
Last Updated on August 24, 2019
Tags: Feels, haiku, poem, love
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