My Story

This is my story. It's vague i know. But i'm a recluse. i only wrote this because i thought i owed it to a friend. *cough* Nick *cough*

I was the girl with big, dark, eyes

And long lashes and sweet lips that hadn’t yet tasted their first kiss.

I’m the girl who’s innocent

Who you’d envy because you used to be.

I was the girl who fell

Painfully slow and Painfully fast

In love.

I was the girl who was then pushed out of it.

I was the girl who wormed her way into your heart with

Her laugh

Her cry

Her dreams.

I was the girl who made you feel self conscious

Simply because she wasn’t.

I was the girl who you saw smiling in the halls

And set out to make cry.

I was the girl who was on top of the world,

But you tore her down.

I was the girl in all of the lies

And all of the stories

And all of the rumors

I was the girl he saw

Still hurting, but still breathing.

I was the girl who convinced him that he could breathe, too.

I’m sorry it wasn’t you, Because

Now I’m the girl who cries at night

Who hurts all the time.

I’m the girl who’s scared.

Who loved too much

And lost even more

I’m the girl who has to remind herself every day

How to breathe.

How to eat.

How to be.

Author's Note

I don't do poetry very often. sorry if it stinks.

Reviews

[Chip]

Its really good! I liek how's its interesting.

[Aravind]

Interesting touch towards the end there!!

[just is]

very interesting read, i like it though. Nicely done

[SheActsLikeSummer]

Brilliant. You make it so easy to relate, twisting your feelings into beautiful words. Excellent work.

[Never-Sane]

Beautifly done!

[J.M. Walker]

This really shows your emotion, and feeling. i lke the repetition also.

[Forevermore]

it doesnt stink, its good, well i like it

[Thea]

This was very interesting...You described yourself here very well...Nice work.
:)))

[Suditi]

This is so beautiful.
Intense.
And easy to relate to.

[Kiari Sabon]

its really nice and im sorry i know what its like