Be Happy

Be Happy

A Poem by The Creative Adventurer

Maybe you are in pain
You failed your test in school
You got shouted at
You got detention 
Or expelled....

Maybe you hate yourself
Because you're too fat
Or too skinny
Or bad at math
And you suffer from the thing
You consider pain?

But consider those others...
Those others in real pain
Those others who lost loved ones
Because of a tornado.  
Or were rejected 
From their family...

You are lucky.
One of the luckiest people on Earth
One of the smartest, best educated 
People on Earth.
One of the most cared for 
People on Earth.

Be happy.

© 2013 The Creative Adventurer


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in the last line break it into
One of the most cared for
People on Earth.

that way its anaphora, and a deeper meaning, and blah blah LA/SS stuff. ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Creative Adventurer

11 Years Ago

Ok thanks!
Bad Wolf

11 Years Ago

:D

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Added on May 24, 2013
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