Sympathy

Jack wrote this for me. He's the guy in my head that gives me advice (or just yells at me).

Why are you so comfortable?

Comfortable in your misery?

You've been here so long

That you can't f*****g see.

This is all your fault.

Author's Note

I might make it longer and turn it into a punk rock song.

Reviews

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... wow ... this verse is brutally poetic ... and asks fearlessly that one question that everyone's afraid to answer ... "comfortable in your misery?" ... and the title is perfect ... and sheer frustration comes through powerfully in the third line ... glad i read this ... a 100 for stating the truth in these unforgettable five lines of sharp poetry ... razor sharp ... awesome ...