What I see in Her

Her words…

Soft whispers of passion’s intentions

Melt over me with each sweet syllable

Caressing my ears, my heart, my soul

 

Her beauty…

Has no rival to envy over

Eyes like an emerald ocean

An aphrodisiac that consumes me

 

Her mind…

Boundless perception and verve

Capturing life’s acquaintance

Such vitality evokes my thirst

 

Her soul…

Where my heart’s days linger

In sweet rapture, longing for her

Where I awaken, desire, and live

 

Her touch…

Soft caresses tantalize my being

Her fingers tease my soul, and rouse desire

Clutching my heart in her sensual grasp

 

Her love…

Such sweet and utter perfection

Seizing my being with all she is

A perfect union of heart and soul

 

All of her…

All words fall tragically short of description

Full of endless wonder, flawless precision

Fulfillment she brings with each gentle kiss

Reviews

i wish i was in love,
great capture of feeling and sharp imagery!

[Erotic Goddess]

All of her�
All words fall tragically short of description
Full of endless wonder, flawless precision
Fulfillment she brings with each gentle kiss

WOW! Wonderful poem, and very very moving! :) Thank you!

[Kevin Connolly]

Have you had this published yet, J. Michael? You should have no trouble, it's a wonderful poem. Magazine publishers will be snapping at your heels to get their hands on it when you send it out to them.
A classic love poem.

[Ameashi]

ah, such passion and beauty. just a over all lovely poem. i love the structure of it. starting out which each small thing: "Her words..." "Her beauty..." "Her mind..." etc
just beautiful!

[* Mourning Starr *]

Mmmm such beautiful words that linger within my soul, what a beautiful and spirited write, it intrigues me how a man can write like this with such passion, I thought only women could capture such tenderness in their writing. I was wrong you are masterful at it....Excellent

[Crap!]

This is great. I have opened a new group called Rage against the mush which is a place to post any poems that are not about "love relatioships" or erotica. I would like for you to join. I'm looking for poems on nature, experiences in life of object poetry like the old pair of jeans you loved and couldn't throw away. I'm sick of poetry that ends up in the bedroom but bounces off the brain. I want stuff like, " Stopping by the Woods on a Snowy Evening" or "The Village Smithy"
I hope you'll consider as you have talent to spare.

[Bubo]

All of her�
All words fall tragically short of description
Full of endless wonder, flawless precision
Fulfillment she brings with each gentle kiss

Loved the end of this..........very erotic all the way through in a subtle way and what a woman to evoke such feelings and words!
You have written a true "love " poem..............

Her love�
Such sweet and utter perfection
Seizing my being with all she is
A perfect union of heart and soul

Perfect indeed!

[Esra]

wow this is very passionate, again u've amazed me, 'All of her�
All words fall tragically short of description
Full of endless wonder, flawless precision
Fulfillment she brings with each gentle kiss' that stanza is really cool i love the alitteration, great language thru out the netire poem

[W.k.kortas]

Tightly constructed, very well put together (like the subject, I'm guessing?). Quality stuff.