What I see in Her

Her words…

Soft whispers of passion’s intentions

Melt over me with each sweet syllable

Caressing my ears, my heart, my soul

 

Her beauty…

Has no rival to envy over

Eyes like an emerald ocean

An aphrodisiac that consumes me

 

Her mind…

Boundless perception and verve

Capturing life’s acquaintance

Such vitality evokes my thirst

 

Her soul…

Where my heart’s days linger

In sweet rapture, longing for her

Where I awaken, desire, and live

 

Her touch…

Soft caresses tantalize my being

Her fingers tease my soul, and rouse desire

Clutching my heart in her sensual grasp

 

Her love…

Such sweet and utter perfection

Seizing my being with all she is

A perfect union of heart and soul

 

All of her…

All words fall tragically short of description

Full of endless wonder, flawless precision

Fulfillment she brings with each gentle kiss

Reviews

[Gandré]

Hello Michael, I enjoyed your love poem a lot. What a beauty. FAvorite.

[Randall Richard]

this i sbeautiful man, i shy away from the traditional love poem because its all been said befor, but this is fantastic. fresh, classic timeless, just beautiful

[Kurt Stroebel]

very descriptive! Love the vivid imagery and the format you used. She's a lucky lady ;)

Thanks for sharing!

[MandarinOranges]

I love it...all of it. Don't even have a favorite line or anything, it's all great. Such beautiful words put together to flow so nicely down the page. I hope I hear words like that someday....*sigh*

[Memnoch]

I like this stanza the best because it spoke to me......
"Her soul�
Where my heart�s days linger
In sweet rapture, longing for her
Where I awaken, desire, and live."
Great lines of love for a lucky lady.
Thanks for sharring J.
Kelley Frost

[Brian C. Noell]

A beautiful flow to the words with just enough sensitivity so as not to be over done.

One of your best works yet.

[Bella Marie]

Hey Hubba

Lucky lucky woman...to have a man write a poem like this about her...makes me *sigh* with such beauty, desiring those words to be whispered to me...definatly a heart stopper for women.
Your style has a gentle flow that lulls the reader into romantic trance, carressing with each gentle yet powerful line.
I cannot chose my fave stanza, tis all perfection, I never had heard of the word "verve" I thought it was a typo, I looked it up and found the definition: enthusiasm or vigor,vivaciousness; liveliness; animation...wow, she is some woman!
Thankyou for sharing this, it is pure beauty for your heart.

Love Belle
XXX

[Charlie Twist]

aw, those are the kind of words that send a girls heart skipping a beat or two....
beautiful..
who ever your lady is, she must consider herself very lucky to have a guy who can appreciate her so much.

and "aphrodisiac"? OooooOOoooooo! nice touch ;)
you don't hear that word a lot:)

[J. Hampton]

Crafted like a sculpture .....with loving hands.
I love the momentum of emotions in this.
I get a mental picture .....of a scene from the movie "Ghost".....where the girl is sitting at a potters wheel working some clay....in comes Patrick Swayze....and well...
The Art is consumed in their passion
Here the passion is consumed in your art

The repiticious beginning in each stanza really works this up
This is a keeper ....
No doubt a selllable piece !!!
10 thumbs UP !!! even though I only have two

Blesssssssssssssss

[Deep in the Woodline...]

Ahhhh, to be smitten. No holding back for you, I see. lol But does she know?