What I see in Her

Her words…

Soft whispers of passion’s intentions

Melt over me with each sweet syllable

Caressing my ears, my heart, my soul

 

Her beauty…

Has no rival to envy over

Eyes like an emerald ocean

An aphrodisiac that consumes me

 

Her mind…

Boundless perception and verve

Capturing life’s acquaintance

Such vitality evokes my thirst

 

Her soul…

Where my heart’s days linger

In sweet rapture, longing for her

Where I awaken, desire, and live

 

Her touch…

Soft caresses tantalize my being

Her fingers tease my soul, and rouse desire

Clutching my heart in her sensual grasp

 

Her love…

Such sweet and utter perfection

Seizing my being with all she is

A perfect union of heart and soul

 

All of her…

All words fall tragically short of description

Full of endless wonder, flawless precision

Fulfillment she brings with each gentle kiss

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

All of her�
All words fall tragically short of description
Full of endless wonder, flawless precision
Fulfillment she brings with each gentle kiss

Beautifully done! This poem in its entirety was a heart stopper.

[Leah Simone]

I should be reading you more - I didn't realize you had such a romantic heart and gift of eloquent language. This was penned with such affection and adoration, I could feel it - what a lucky woman to have such words written for her - your love is intense and gentle - a joy to read - Leah

[Crystal L. Test]

All of her�
All words fall tragically short of description
Full of endless wonder, flawless precision
Fulfillment she brings with each gentle kiss

This is my favorite part, also.

I love the irony in a writer, who has a gift for being able to find the right words, realizing that sometimes we are actually hindered by only having the use of that same language. Great job and thanks for sharing.

[Krystal Waters]

Nice poem, very sensual and nice wording. I wish I had a love like that!


Krystal

[Tamiviolet]

you took my breath away with this one, literally.

"and aphrodisiac that consumes me"...intense line...my favorite.

beautiful love poetry, J. Michael.

peace.
tamiviolet

[Mystery Inside]

Very nice piece. I think you do a wonderful job expressing emotion and I really like the structure.

[Mike]

This is a lovley peice. your words seem very sincere. very lucky to have these kinds of feelkings. Great form and passion

[Kristina Moulaison]

Your words are beautiful. I love the way you break down all the aspects of her to express all the ways she is loved.

Her soul�
Where my heart�s days linger
In sweet rapture, longing for her
Where I awaken, desire, and live

Lovely. Music to a woman's ears!

[Butch Mcpeterson ( I Ca..]

Really good job man. The imagery was great. I loved how you explained in detail each aspect of the girl in this. I also really like the way you set this up, it flowed very well. Good write.

Your pal,
Butch.

[Goddess Sophia (filomen..]

a beautiful piece showing the love complete...all the senses...
the mind...body...soul...
the entire being...
this is love...