Midnight Srenity

 

All is dark except for the moon

Hanging from the Midnight sky

At first glance it appears to stand alone

The only object to bring light

 

The all at once I see the stars

Their beauty holds my eyes

Never to be forgotten

Lighting up the midnight sky

 

I watch the leaves rustle on the ground

As the cool night air surrounds me

Everything seems so still

Except for the song the crickets sing

 

I rise to stand taking one last look

As a feeling of peace comes over me

I open the door and go inside

Leaving behind the nights serenity

Reviews

[closed account]

beautiful scene you painted, we all have taken for granted that the starts are there.. very nice.. :-)

[Deep in the Woodline...]

Nice captivation of a moment in time, beau.

[Crap!]

This piece is nice and peaceful with great flow and an enchanting scene painted for the reader. Really good job on this.

[* Mourning Starr *]

Funny how one night out of hundreds we find poetic enough to write about, this was very sweet I could almost see what you were seeing through your words...Well done.

[Isis Raven]

WOW! as i read this i imagine my self viewing this through your eyes, truely beutiful and inspiring.

[Sweet Temptation]

I love the flow of this piece. As I read each line, a sense of tranquility overcame me stimulating all my senses. You portray such vivid images with grace. I won't see the moon and stars the same way. Wonderful read and write. **Smile**

[Bella Marie]

This piece evokes a feeling of peacefulness and as you put it "serenity"
I love how you have given me a vision of what you felt and saw that stary night. I love the moon, the stars and the ocean, perfect settings for romance and inspiration.

Beautiful, thankyou for sharing.

Bella Marie
xxx

[Michey Sharp]

I really like this one...you have a way of putting pictures into words.