memories.

dreams of you and i are what i had in my head.
'ill end up hurting you" is what you said.
"you wont" was my response.
time is what passed.
kisses made our smiles.
hands gliding made our hearts jump.
eyes gazing made our minds get lost.
connection made us.
distance broke us.
tears turned into pain.
heart ache turned into suffering.
going back and restarting should be.

Reviews

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beautiful-wonderfully nostalgic-magnificent piece!

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[Reedoh]

I think, "Aww." when I read this.

[Undying Glory]

wow, i have to agree with ashley here, really beautiful work. and also really saddening as well. this sounds like a long distance relationship, and i agree, they are very hard to maintain, and very sad for both partners if they break up in the end. you've really done it with this one. nice job

[Ashley Black]

beautiful taylor. it really is. very good use of line breaks and word choice it makes the work flow nicely and is easy to read. good job keep it up