A moment of wait...

A choice.

Day by day,
She waited.
Moment by moment,
She grew,
From a wait,
That never came.
Set free she did,
Into a world unknown.
Full of hurt,
She was,
Until it came back along.
Only this time,
About it she felt so strong.
With every right she found,
Before there was a wrong.
Tried to understand,
She couldn't.
Finally she realized,
The wait was not the hardest,
It was the who,
That was in need of it.
She then decided,
If it is a wait,
That is needed,
For this one particular who.
It shall be a wait,
She will happily give.
Although,
Her choice she makes,
Is not only for her,
But,
For The who,
That wants to grow.
Day by day,
They will work it through.
Even though,
Moment by moment,
She will always be waiting,
For that wait,
To end.
All she expects,
From the who,
Is that he allows,
Her to stand there,
Waiting,
Patiently by his side.
All she will ask,
Is for the who,
To let her know,
When,
The right time has come.
Moment by moment,
She will be waiting.
But,
All she will be giving,
Is her word,
And no more than,
A moment of wait.

Reviews

[Kent Rawski]

interesting will hope prevail she obviously trusts it will patient loving and giving she has been this way before if only now this who would open up the door

[Sami Khalil]

If we believe in something or know in our hearts things will happen or we just want to test our fate we have to be patient and wait for the hopes and promises...Bravo..................

[I Am Svetlana]

Ah, the experience of waiting...for someone, for something...the anticipation eats away at us. I can relate to this because of how I used to get myself ready and wait for my boyfriend to come pick me up, then he would never show up...when the night before and earlier that day, he promised he would show. It takes such a tole on your heart and the pain is so personal that it would take so much for any other person to be able to understand. Waiting could be a good or bad thing. Never in between. That's how I see it.

[Smarmadon21]

Don't wait! Make your own moment! The gods help those who help themselves. But alas, I have been in the same stagnant state before, waiting for the right moment to come along, waiting for the signal to charge ahead and lay claim to victory. Or food. Or Black Friday deals. Or kisses, whatever the moment calls for.

[Taylor Munnerlyn]

The poem is me telling him that i have been hurt badly from just waiting..4yrs straight actually. But im letting him know that i am will to try it again for him because i feel its different and worth it. But at the same time i am telling him that me waiting isnt going to be long..only for a moment

[Dr. Wood ?]

I think most of us have experienced the WAIT....Sometimes it is all that you can do, whether it be for something great, or something terrible

[Taylor Munnerlyn]

I wrote it to show him that i will be there to wait if he wants me to but not if the wait is never going to end

[Dr. Wood ?]

I understood, I have known a few people in my long life that have been thru what you are going thru...there is no short sharp answer, it relys upon common sense and a sense of love and responsibility...I feel your pain and it shows in your poetry

[Taylor Munnerlyn]

Well thank you

[Dr. Wood ?]

It inspired me to write a poem along the same lines, I hope you don't mind, take a look if you like it is called LOST..thanks

[SOUL LESS]

This was rather nice. Especially the last 10 lines or so, you could've a few more in the same vein.

[Taylor Munnerlyn]

Like what? I did my best to just get my point out wwithout havingto go too deep. thanks for the review.

[SOUL LESS]

I just re read it. I think it's fine the way it is. I thought, initially, that you could add a few more lines of "all that she asks" and "all that she expects". But I think it's great. The end is great. The start could be improved. Just feel it could. Ask a romantic poet, I do not write romance, poetry or prose.

[Taylor Munnerlyn]

I think I wrote that way because the way i have written my other poems..idk why but its what came. I like the idea all that she asks and all that she expects would you mind if I used it

[Taylor Munnerlyn]

Oh nvm. I did those words like that because its talking about the who. But in the poem..the who is actually the one i wrote the poem for. He hasnt seen it yet. I wrote it after he left because i might have messed us up

[SOUL LESS]

I copied those from the poem. They're your ideas :) The poem is fine.

[Taylor Munnerlyn]

Yes i realizedthat ha