not your average super hero

a poem for Ami N.

no cape

no powers

no criptnite

no tights

no superhero

shes just plain ami

a flower doesnt bloom

but beauty shines through

im sure of it

shes not just any superhero

shes more than that

im sure if you met her

you'd see my point

she doesnt need

those capes

or powers

all she needs

is a heart of mine

i know its true

because i seen what she can do

she doesnt need to fly

because she there no matter what

no flowers bloom

but its not what matters

its ami

that shines through

if only you new her to

 

Author's Note

this poem is for Ami N. i thought i should give something back because she has always been so nice and loves my poetry i hope she loves this one 2. i think its amazing and i hope all enjoy 2

Reviews

[Ami N.]

OH MY GOSH. Thank you so much for this beautiful poem!! Ahh I just got tears in my eyes. This is so sweet and touching. It's the first poem someone has written for me, about me. I really thank you from the bottom of my heart for such a beautiful poem dedicated to me. Your poems are so unique, so simple, so powerful, so different from others I’ve read before, I couldn’t help but review on what I have to say about your marvelous works. I can’t thank you enough for this.

I wish I could give you a virtual hug =D
Thank You!!

[Desiree S.]

This was a touching poem and I can tell every word came from your heart.
Lovely!

[Priscilla Sayers]

A sweet and loving tribute to a friend. Very nicely done. She must be proud to call you a friend:)

[stars are far]

THis was so nice ..truely like this ..
well done :D

[Wren]

Beautiful!! A lovely, touching poem that was written for the perfect person! Amazing work that bought tears to my eyes. Keep Writing!

[13ReasonsWhy]

awhhh this is so cute!!! loved it!! :)

[~Dragon X]

It's a very sweet poem! :D I've never had a poem made for me before, you're lucky Amrah. XD I have the habit of going back and fixing minor grammatical errors in a poem or story. I think you should do it; it would make the poem flow a little more smoothly. Yaaay keep it up! :D

[Summer D.]

XD This is adorable. Nice idea. Very nicely written~
Keep it going. :)


@Amrah: You can. * hug *