this is a song i wrote

i wrote this song but its not that good

im trying to find you

to believe you but im lost

i try to get back on the rode

but i keep falling behind

im trying to find you

just to understand

where you belong

its harder than it seems

just to move on

like i never knew

my heart is nothing bigger

than what the skies are

please tell me why

chorus:

ooohhhhhh

ohhhhhhhhhh

 

im trying to get back to where i belong

i been trying to find you

but theres something im not sure of

to this day im lost

baby i never knew you

but i know now these skies are grey

im trying to find you

to believe you

but this i know now

your not trying to find meeeeeeeeee

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow and the story in the poem. Hard to understand when we hold love and desire and we are alone in the emotion. Very nice flow of words in this song. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Priscilla Sayers]

very bluesy.. Nice . I like it, now put a melody with it:)

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Very nicely done, Enjoyed your write.