miguel

his name is miguel

i met him on facebook

i know thats a big no no

but hes sweet and kind

full of heart

im not sure why but todays his birthday

he wants a real woman

i want to say your looking at her

but thats not what hes thinking

his name is miguel

i feel wierd

but im sure its love

but not sure

what love is

or what it feels like

ive ran from it for so long

that i lost track

of what it is

his name is miguel

with his beautiful brown eyes

hed never date a girl like me

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The places like Facebook and MySpace are places to meet people. To create love need many dates and a lot of long conversations. Never know what a person is till you sit with them and talk of great dreams and look into their eyes. Love need touch and friendship. Never rush into the emotion of love. May missed the best parts. A interesting poem. I have known people who have met on the internet. None had a long relationships. Real life is different then what we write on Facebook. Thank you for the excellent story and poem. BUT we never know what is real till we test life. Please be careful
Coyote

[Priscilla Sayers]

Taylor nice write:)

[sivan]

this is so honest with a childlike attitude towards attraction... good piece

[Rene Velez]

nice write with honest thoughts, and something new, the chances we take to be happy, well scribed...

[Hoosier Belle]

wonderful write and feeling to get when reading this write. nicely done ♥