i dont know what it is

i dont know what it is

A Poem by taylorrose

i dont know what it is

about the grass

just the smell of it freshly cut

the whisling sound it makes aginest the wind

i dont know what it is

about the grass

the way it feels on my hands

the way it touches my feet

i dont know what it is

about the grass

but i love it so much

i could just sleep there

the way it holds me like no one else has

the way it never lets go

i dont know what it is

about the grass

the green that has no fades

the way it looks when the sun hits it

i dont know what it is

about the grass

that i love so much

other then how it sits

waiting fo what

i dont know is to come

i dont know what it is

about the grass

© 2011 taylorrose


Author's Note

taylorrose
this poem is writen about something i really love and i have no reason of knowing why i love it so much. i guess these could be all the reasons i love it. i need help with a title if you know a good one let me know if its better then the one i have thank you.

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A field of grass and trees. A meditation for the wise. The feel of the grass allow us to feel the gift of nature against our skin. I enjoyed this poem. The simple things of life are the beautiful and amazing things for the wise in mind and in heart. Thank you for a excellent poem.
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Simplicity is key here...nicely done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A field of grass and trees. A meditation for the wise. The feel of the grass allow us to feel the gift of nature against our skin. I enjoyed this poem. The simple things of life are the beautiful and amazing things for the wise in mind and in heart. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote


Posted 13 Years Ago


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so random lol but a nice poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I've always loved and embraced nature so I loved this poem. Nice work..xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Love it!
The grass always an inviting place to sit, to lie back and watch the clouds go by.. or the stars and the moon.
Me and my kids do that!!!")

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I sneeze when i smell fresh cut grass; This is a wonderful beuatiful write.

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taylorrose

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