to you

to you

A Poem by taylorrose
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this just explains my life and how hard i worked for it.

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this comes from my heart

to the people who love me

im sorry i gave up

im sorry i tried so hard

pushed my self so hard

that i pushed you away

if i could take it all back

i promise i would

this comes from the heart

to the people who love me

i love you so much

i know in my heart

i hurt you oh so much

but theres one thing i know

you will always love me

but i cant say i would

this comes from the heart

to the people who love me

im trying hard to be perfect

i know theres no such thing as perfect

but im trying to be just that

im sorry im sorry

ill never get it right

ill never make it

to be something

i dont have to push

i want to do better

then my best

thats why im a pusher

you told me to slow down

to take it easy

but i didnt listen

now im over the hedge

trying to hold on

im sorry im sorry

this comes from the heart

to the people who love me

and who ill always love back

© 2011 taylorrose


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I can feel guilt and anxiety. Self doubt. Very well written.
Keep holding on Taylor... You never know what may come. Sorry is one of the hardest words to say, for as imperfect humans that we are, our pride can cloud the way to remorse, it can overshadow the vulnerability that in itself is not weakness... It is how you choose to react during your time of vulnerability that defines weakness. Stand up as you have hear and swallow the hard coal sized lump of pride that catches like lead in your wind pipe. It is a hard one to swallow. But release it and you will find another strength that you never thought you had.

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I can feel guilt and anxiety. Self doubt. Very well written.
Keep holding on Taylor... You never know what may come. Sorry is one of the hardest words to say, for as imperfect humans that we are, our pride can cloud the way to remorse, it can overshadow the vulnerability that in itself is not weakness... It is how you choose to react during your time of vulnerability that defines weakness. Stand up as you have hear and swallow the hard coal sized lump of pride that catches like lead in your wind pipe. It is a hard one to swallow. But release it and you will find another strength that you never thought you had.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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such a sad write, so sorry if this is true, love the ending though left room for hope. Very nicely written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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taylorrose
taylorrose

marshalltown, IA



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you learn to live your life your way. you earn how to free yourself from your own demons. in the process you find love in the most delicate places. this is my life and I own it. more..

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