where is god

where is god

A Poem by taylorrose

where is god

is there a heaven

is the bible real

where is god

when i need him most

where is god

is there a heaven

that when i die

i go to

im not sure there is a place

im not sure that

the bible really holds true

god seems cruel

he seems to take us

on painful journeys

where is god

where is heaven

if there is such a place

does anyone know

© 2011 taylorrose


Author's Note

taylorrose
i didnt write this to take anyones beliefs but to question my own and to get a understanding of where is he and where is this place called heaven if it excist not to offened anyone if you are please message me.

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i wouldn't describe god as a he or she, i cant understand why we think he is in our image??? the bible is an interesting piece of lit but to say its the word of god... i suppose earth is the nearest thing to heaven though drastically messed. which is sadder than all.

nice write though.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Everyone questions their beliefs at one time or another.... It is what your heart feels.... it is the doubt in your mind blocking you from HIM.
God is everywhere, in the wind the trees, the stars, the grass you walk across, the rocks you skip across the water, the water that you skipped the rock across... But most of all, never forget. We were made in His image, man and woman, two parts to a whole. So where is God? In you my dear. Sit quietly for me. Outside beneath a tre, a perfect time now that Autumn is upon us... Breathe in the brisk air, clear your mind and close your eyes. Just listen and feel... No thinking, nothing but soaking in. Maybe you will be that much closer if you don't seek, just sit. He will come to you. He is never cruel.... He does give lessons but you chose the ones you get by the way you react to the situations at hand. live light heart by letting him hear your prayers. Talk to him like a friend, and I promise...You will feel him my friend.
Chin up.
Stiff upper lip.
Listen to some BoB Marley.
Smile even if it doesn't feel natural and soon it will be.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You question the questions with many answers. I believe we set-up our life. Need to be kind and helpful. Try not to be negative. And hope there is a better place. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I believe. they call it blind faith for a reason. everything in my intellect refutes a higher power, but EVERYTHING in my heart, soul, and spirit knows that God is real! I do not, however, believe in organized religion. anything that is created by and (especially) controlled by the hands of man is likely flawed and fueled by corruption. I say believe whatever you want. none of us really know and no one's guess is any better than another's.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

@killerhands im sorry to offened you but im only questioning what many believe but have no proof that its there just like sivan said its hard to believe something when theres no proof understand.

Posted 13 Years Ago


its a question in many minds im sure... sometimes its hard to believe in something when there is no physical proof... nice depiction of this faltering faith

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

@KillerHands...not everybody has to believe in god..i for one dont! im not putting down your beliefs as you have hers. So I have a question for you! If god created us..then who created god? everything starts and ends somewhere and there are other galaxies out there too. For us to have been created by god then someone must have created god and that person before him. And as for the light shines crap, can't we just be us without having to say someone made me who i am today. I believe that I am me because of the choices I make and have made,not because someone made me this way. And if anyone made me it was my parents.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not to mean anything bad about what you said but...
How is there such beautiful solar systems and planets out there? If there wasn't a heaven then how could we get here? We weren't born from dinosaurs but God's image.(Thumbs up if you liked the dino thing^-^) ANYWAY!!! If there wasn't a heaven then why is there peace in everyone's mind even though they don't believe there is?
IF there wasn't a heaven then how come light shines in all our hearts?
Wow that sounded like a poem! Imma go make one!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

i wouldn't describe god as a he or she, i cant understand why we think he is in our image??? the bible is an interesting piece of lit but to say its the word of god... i suppose earth is the nearest thing to heaven though drastically messed. which is sadder than all.

nice write though.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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you learn to live your life your way. you earn how to free yourself from your own demons. in the process you find love in the most delicate places. this is my life and I own it. more..

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