i finally see

i finally see

A Poem by taylorrose
"

i have always been different and i finally see why i am.

"

i finally see

that its more

than just a curse

these words

these stories

i finally see

my lifes purpose

its to tell my story

what story i have

i finally see

that its more

than a curse

but sent to me

by god himself

im given

the voice

inside myself

words i cant control

things i know

but never seen

the pain i lived

i finally see

that its more

than ill ever know

© 2011 taylorrose


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so im getting comfortable with your writing now after having read so many. you have a very distinct style which i like.. it has good flow and littlen rhyming which is pleasant and there is always repetition... this is one of my favourites that i've read. the ending is powerful

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A beautiful glimpse into your realization!
Inspire sweet girl!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

When we learn to live with the things done to us and what we have done. We may be able to see our path and become stronger. I like the feel and the ending to this excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very few people have the insight and wisdom (especially at such a young age) to acknowledge that all life's trials and tribulations happen for a reason and even fewer people can take a negative experience or situation and turn it into something positive. that, my dear, is a gift in itself. wonderful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so im getting comfortable with your writing now after having read so many. you have a very distinct style which i like.. it has good flow and littlen rhyming which is pleasant and there is always repetition... this is one of my favourites that i've read. the ending is powerful

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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taylorrose
taylorrose

marshalltown, IA



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you learn to live your life your way. you earn how to free yourself from your own demons. in the process you find love in the most delicate places. this is my life and I own it. more..

Writing
He was He was

A Poem by taylorrose